I tried to make a new thing

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I tried to make a new thing from the piece
I had on hand.  How else does one move right
or left or up or down, how else a lease
on future space and time when new is tight

and old is repetitious like the past
again again again until I scream,
enough enough please let me out.  The cast,
the script, the horrid play, I know I've seen.

This time I turn and see your face, I scrunch
my eyes to see if you are seeing me.
Please see me, see me, act upon your hunch
that something new could come and we could be

two dancers in these squares across the floor,
a pattern, new, that never came before.


Inspired by this photo and after seeing new Tom Cruise movie, Edge of Tomorrow

Image: EintoeRn
Words: Colornote
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JJPoatree's avatar
wonderful image and excellent sonnet! Clap Heart